Looking back at my opening for my thriller I have noticed that in one scene, the main character (me) had her nails painted when she was unlocking and opening her front door to her house whereas in the rest of the opening her nails are not painted, this is evident mainly in the scene where she is applying her makeup trying to hide her bruises. If I were film the opening again I would pay more attention to smaller details to improve the continuity of the opening.
Below is two screenshots to show the issue with mise en scene and continuity which was not noticed by the group when filming.
Good observation, however, you need to mention more than just this. What else could have been improved?
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