Well done - i like this because I think it really connects with your youthful target audience. It has a naivety (in a good way) about that really works - a couple of observations - reviews in LWL and Metro are inconsistent. This is a youthful market - they will not relate to LWL, they will to METRO.
maker of - add "and" before mentioning third film. Do consider if you would be able to use YOUTUBE logo without incurring copyright restrictions.
Well done - i like this because I think it really connects with your youthful target audience. It has a naivety (in a good way) about that really works - a couple of observations - reviews in LWL and Metro are inconsistent. This is a youthful market - they will not relate to LWL, they will to METRO.
ReplyDeletemaker of - add "and" before mentioning third film.
Do consider if you would be able to use YOUTUBE logo without incurring copyright restrictions.